Saturday, September 26, 2009

Story Style

Ok, i finally have post the first episode and chapter of the story, please read it whether you can understand or not before i continue the next chapter, if i spell something wrong or grammar error just tell me, i dont mind.


The first episode own 3 chapters, but the rest only have 2, dont ask me why, just only because i like that way, nothing special, lol! You need to pay attention to all the chapters , even though it's lame or stupid, you still have to do that, everything the characters did, pick, inspected and talk usually are the clue to know about their background story or the main, im too lazy to open another timeline and make the story more longer, which is doesnt make sense + wasting time.


Anyway, if you notice that the time has a negative form, which mean the chapter took place in past, otherwise it's present, i know it's too complicated to do that, but trust me, the original version is way more teruk than this one.

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

It's nice! Personally, you my 1st friend write novel! LOL!

Deric Adrian said...

thnx^^
too bad i cant continue the nxt chapter since my bro deleted the microsoft office.... haiz...tis is the 2nd time liao...